Duly Noted - Chapter 1
Chapter One
The laughter died in a split-second. No one saw it coming.
Metal snapped, scrapped and twisted. The air reeked of something salty and
mercurial. Life changed forever.
May 24. 10:17 p.m.
The rain poured down, blanketing everything in its path with
a cold wetness that chilled to the bone. The dark sky blew up with arcs of
forked lightning, lighting up the area for miles. In the distance, sirens
wailed, getting louder on approach. Gasps and inaudible sounds came from the
onlookers who stood around drenched yet watching. Unable to help. Unsure of
where to start.
***
Aurora drove through the pounding rain, with her momma in
the passenger seat, and Carmen behind her. Normally Carmen would drive, as she
attended the University there, but tonight she let Aurora take the wheel. They
enjoyed a perfect girl’s weekend– eating more than normal, staying out late and
shopping.
Laughing, and singing off key to an old country song on the
radio, they headed back to their hotel after an exhaustive but successful
search for the perfect dress. Aurora’s high school graduation was less than two
weeks away. Carmen, her older sister, said the ball gown made the blue in her
eyes dance, and Derek would think she was the most beautiful girl at the
ceremony. But Aurora knew he’d think that anyways. He always told her that.
Still blocks from the hotel, Aurora drove down the scenic
one-way street and thought nothing of checking for traffic approaching the stop
signs. A set of white lights, bright enough to blind her peripheral vision,
appeared out of nowhere. No time to react and slam on the brakes.
“Momma!” she screamed, as her head cracked against her mom’s
shoulder, which was now closer than it should have been. When the vehicle
stopped moving, Aurora’s head smashed into the driver’s side window, shattering
it into millions of pieces before her world turned dark.
Coming back from the dark, she slowly pieced together what
she saw. A dark grey dashboard, the cream colour of the airbag puddled on her
lap, and several red blinking lights in the distance. Not a fender-bender, but
a major accident. She was involved in a car crash. The kind she’d watched on
her favourite medical dramas. One day she hoped to be on the other side as the
ER doctor. But today, she’d be the patient.
Her jeans, cold and wet against her skin, made her shiver,
bringing her back to the present. Were her ears deceiving her? All around her,
an eerie silence stretched out – like the kind you get when you wake in the
middle of the night from a nightmare. Yet as she strained her ear, murmurs
could be heard. A gasp here and there. And some gargled breathing. And that sound chilled her even more than
the cold. Because it was close. Too close. It didn’t help her stay calm when
the smells surrounding her were as frightening – strong and overpowering, but
also unfamiliar as there was no textbook or literature on that. And without a moment’s hesitation, she never wanted to smell
them again. They reeked of fear and death.
“Momma,” she said in a painful, whispered breath.
Her head leaned on the edge of the window, allowing the rain
to mix with her tears. She tried to lift her head, but it weighed at least
fifty pounds. And it ached. Like every other part of her body. A quick roving
body search confirmed that she was alive – the indescribable pain told her as
much. Pushing against the door to right herself, she screamed in agony and
blacked out again.
Awaking later as warm fingertips palpitated her face. A soft
male voice said, “My name’s Jordan and I’m here to help you.”
A clap of thunder overhead startled Aurora more than the
hands that slipped something solid and plastic around her neck. “Momma?
Carmen?” she called out in a hoarse whisper. Forcing her eyes open, she tried
to twist her restrained head to search for her mother and sister. Even
straining from the corner of her eyes, they weren’t there.
“Don’t move.” Jordan’s voice spoke with such calmness that
for a moment she thought the situation wasn’t as bad as it was. Momma wasn’t
there, no sound from Carmen, and yet Jordan spoke as if he were simply removing
a splinter from her finger. Maybe I’m
dreaming.
Lightning split the sky into two distinct pieces and
ground-rattling thunder immediately followed. It lit up the empty passenger
seat with a missing door. “Momma?”
“She’s been removed from the car already,” Jordan said. His
warm fingers caused an involuntary shudder to course through her body. The
shaking hurt her in more ways than she could count, or wanted to count. It made
her nauseous. It made her nervous. “Carmen?” she screamed in her mind. Surely
she could hear her?
Aurora returned her focus to the person talking to her. What
was his name? Joe? Jordan? What in hell was he doing on the hood of her car?
Where was her windshield?
She focused on his face. “You’ve been in a bad accident, and
your mom’s already en route to the hospital. We’re trying to get you out. You’re
pinned against a railing, so once we have you properly protected, they’ll pull
your car away, so we can get better access to you. Shouldn’t be much longer.”
She performed some version of a nod, but it was hard to
gauge with her immobile head.
I remember seeing the
headlights. Bright and almost on top of us. I don’t remember hearing the
squealing brakes from that vehicle. The sliding lasted forever, but I think it
was only three or four lanes. I don’t remember seeing a brick wall, but I do
remember suddenly stopping.
Straining her eyes to the edges, she tried to take in her
surroundings. Like something on the news, blue and red lights flashed around,
belonging to a firetruck and an ambulance or two? It was hard to tell. The area
was lit up with beams of light and there were voices everywhere.
“She’s secure,” Jordan called out as he turned his head. To
her he said, “They’re going to pull the vehicle back so you’ll feel a deep
shaking.”
Oh fuck. She
understood what that meant. More pain. Because it wasn’t enough to hurt from
head to toe already. However, this pain would be nothing when the vehicle
moved, rattling her once more. Unlike the crash, she knew what was coming.
Preparing for it was another matter. I
need to focus or I’m going to black out. Think, Aurora, think. Look at the man.
Jordan, was it? Don’t think about the pain that’s coming. I’m in good hands.
She focused on the paramedic as he slid off the hood and stepped back, nodding
to someone.
The vehicle violently shook as it skidded and scraped
against the ground, the noise deafening. Unable to cover her ears, it invaded
her soul. But the worst was the horrible metallic sound of a saw blade cutting
into metal surrounding her. This time she figured she’d go deaf as the noise
pierced her ears. Reactively, she jerked and blinding pain radiated through her
before she blacked out again.
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